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In a room quiet enough
for one or two sentences,

they wait for their
breath instead of finding
the words that could save them.
©2009 ~shahath
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I was looking at the categories, and I couldn't decide if this was romance or horror.

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:icondeerose:
Sounds a little romantic to me. Welcome back!

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I'm fuckin' it real.

A rose blooms in the desert.
:iconshahath:
Yes, I suppose it is. Then I read it again and it's all bent from horror.

lol i haet writin.

Oh, and thanks. :)
:icondeerose:
At least you can write! I'm not all that great with it. =P

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I'm fuckin' it real.

A rose blooms in the desert.
:iconshahath:
We all have our talents; though, I still say I can't write.

erg.
:icondeerose:
:evileye:

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I'm fuckin' it real.

A rose blooms in the desert.
:iconvirgokitten:
AHH FRUSTRATING. Must. zoom. in. on. picture.

On the poem: Love.

It reminds me of [link] <-- well, a little, since it mentioned words. I think I am only tying the two together because I just re-read that poem. Drats.

I love how it's simple but seems to resound in the little text box.

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“This is the way the world ends,
not with a bang but a whimper"
--The Hollow Men, T. S. Eliot.
:iconshahath:
Yeah, I noticed deviantART minimizes the pictures now, so I edited it to be smaller; that way, it seems less blurred almost. At least to me.

deviantART has done a number of things over the last few years that has seemed, well, stupid.

Your fix on it makes me think pretty much the same thing.

:heart:
:icondead-now:
Recently I have found a comfort in simple poetry. It seems that more can be said. Sometimes. Thus I was drawn to this.

I don't know how I missed this before. You'll have to accept my apology.

I would say 'Horror' is more appropriate seeing how frightening it is that some people insist on... well... 'cold silence'. I think this captures that lack-of-passion relationship so prominent in society.

I don't really have any suggestions for improvement at the moment. I find that common with this style (perhaps it's the reason for my sudden interest). I like this.

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'I am leaving, I am leaving. But the fighter still remains.'
:iconshahath:
I was going to quote Mickey, in the scene where Turkish had apologized, but then I realized that it didn't really apply.

This is actually what I love about feedback, hearing how people react to it. I really had no idea how to categorize the work in terms of genre placement, but reading the thoughts of others here explain that it is, indeed, a subjective effort and unnecessary to even try.

You're just as correct in your reasoning as another would be finding the romance in it, and I love that about people.

It makes me want to explore your mind... but I don't think I will.


Oh, and surely, thank you.

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